UAS BAHASA INGGRIS
Nama : Danu
Nim : 220201036
Prodi : Teknik Elektro
Semester 1
Dosen Pengampu : Dr. Zulzalifah
1.Draft Sentence Building awal smpai UTS
2.Bukti koreksi berupa lembar praktik simulasi penyuntingan naskah
3.Naskah bersih 8 kriteria hasil sentence building
4.Hasil rekaman video yg terupload di youtobbe channel
1. Know Engineering Control and Examples of
Its Application
Engineering control is one of the five
techniques available for controlling hazards in the work environment. This technique has a value that is more
effective than some other techniques.
Although it still has the risk of danger, at least this can be minimized
more effectively. Engineering control is
also known as engineering engineering.
Of the five hazard control techniques in the workplace, the company can
conduct a needs analysis that is most suitable to be applied with the help of
Software Engineering. There are five hazard control techniques or more
popularly known as the hazard hierarchy or hierarchy of control. This hazard control hierarchy is an important
principle in hazard control in the workplace.
The five hazard control techniques are elimination, reduction,
engineering control, administrative control, and personal protective equipment.
Example of Application of Engineering Control
The following are some examples of the
application of engineering controls in controlling hazards in the workplace:
1. Installing the motorcycle cover
Machines that are open or can be seen directly
so that they are easily touched will have a higher risk of harm. Therefore a machine has a cover with a
function to reduce the risk of danger from its use. Like the fan on the pump motor, blower, or
compressor is equipped with a cover or cover.
The goal is to reduce the risk of being exposed to the danger of fan
rotation. This technique is one of the
hazard control using engineering control.
2. Installation of a safety fence at the
transformer site
Electricity has become a human need in
carrying out their daily activities. The
location of the transformer is an area that has a high electrical voltage. High-voltage electricity can be found in
certain areas such as towers, engine rooms, and UPS (uninterrupted power
supply) rooms. Transformer area coverage
is for authorized technicians only. This
must also be accompanied by the application of engineering controls to protect
workers from the dangers of high voltage electric shock.
Conclusion
Control of hazards in the work environment is
one of the things that companies must do in ensuring the safety and health of
their workers. The technique that can be
done is using engineering control.
Companies can determine engineering more easily and as needed with the
help of Software Engineering from HashMicro.
This can provide benefits through more efficient project management that
the company is running. Download the
following price scheme as a consideration for your company's Software
Engineering decision.
2.
Determine the 5W+1H Elements in the text
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No |
WH |
Sentence Building
(Question and Answer) |
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1 |
Who |
Who, is
required to have hazard control in the work environment? It is mandatory for every company to have
hazard control in the work environment. |
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Who has need
Electry ? Electricity has become a human need in carrying out their daily
activities |
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2 |
What |
What, is meant
by engineering control? What is meant
by engineering control is one of the five existing techniques for controlling
hazards in the work environment. |
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What is the
conclusion in controlling Hazards in the work environment? Control of hazards in the work environment
is one of the things that companies must do in ensuring the safety and health
of their workers. The technique that
can be done is using engineering control.
Companies can determine engineering more easily and as needed with the
help of Software Engineering from HashMicro. |
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3 |
Where |
Where, can we
apply engineering control in hazard control?
At workplace |
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Where . High-voltage electricity can be found ? in
certain areas such as towers, engine rooms, and UPS (uninterrupted power
supply) rooms. |
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4 |
Why |
Why, is
hazard control in the work environment so desirable? Because to ensure the safety and health of
its workers |
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Why , .
Therefore a machine has a cover ? for to reduce the risk of danger |
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5 |
When |
When, can we
apply engineering controls in hazard control?
When installing the motor cover and installing a safety fence on the
transformer. |
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When when can we
use Engineering Control ? when we work in the factory |
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6 |
How |
How conclusion
of the text above ? Control of hazards in the work environment is one of the
things that companies must do in ensuring the safety and health of their
workers. |
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how is the
application of engineering control in the installation of motor covers ? Electricity
has become a human need in carrying out their daily activities. The location of the transformer is an area
that has a high electrical voltage. |
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3.
Verbal and nominal sentences
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No |
Sentences |
V |
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01 |
Although it still has the risk of danger |
V |
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02 |
at least this can be minimized more
effectively. |
V |
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03 |
Engineering control is also known as
engineering engineering |
V |
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04 |
the company can conduct |
V |
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05 |
Installing the motorcycle |
V |
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06 |
High-voltage electricity can be found in certain
areas such as towers, engine rooms, and UPS |
V |
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07 |
Transformer area coverage is for authorized
technicians on |
V |
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08 |
analysis that is most suitable to be applied
with the help of Software Engineering. |
V |
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09 |
Therefore a machine has a cover with a function
to reduce the risk of danger from its use |
V |
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10 |
Like the fan on the pump motor |
V |
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No |
Sentences |
N |
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01 |
Know Engineering Control and Examples of Its
Application Engineering |
N |
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02 |
This technique has a value |
N |
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03 |
Engineering control is also known as
engineering engineering |
N |
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04 |
the company can conduc |
N |
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05 |
blower, or compressor is equipped with a
cover or cover. |
N |
|
06 |
This technique is one of the hazard control
using engineering contro |
N |
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07 |
Engineering control is also known as engineering
engineering |
N |
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08 |
Therefore a machine has a cover with a
function to reduce the risk of danger from its use |
N |
|
09 |
Like the fan on the pump motor, blower, or
compressor |
N |
|
10 |
The goal is to reduce the risk of being
exposed to the danger of fan rotation |
N |
4.Tenses
and it's Pattern
(+)
: The company implements a control control system
(-)
: The company does not implement a control control system
(?)
: Does the company implement a control control system
5.
List Of vacobulary
A. List
of Vocabulary
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No |
Vocabulary |
Pronoun Spelling |
Meaning |
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01 |
Engeneering |
/ˌenjəˈniriNG/ |
Rekayasa |
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02 |
Control |
/kənˈtrōl/ |
Kendalli |
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03 |
Function |
/ˈfəNG(k)SHən/ |
Fungsi |
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04 |
Person |
/ˈpərs(ə)n/ |
Orang |
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05 |
Company |
/ˈkəmp(ə)nē/ |
Perusahaan |
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06 |
Danger |
/ˈdānjər/ |
Bahaya |
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07 |
Software |
/ˈsôf(t)ˌwer/ |
Perangkat
lunak |
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08 |
Safety |
/ˈsāftē/ |
Keamanan |
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09 |
Risk |
/risk/ |
Resiko |
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10 |
Work |
/wərk/ |
Kerja |
6. Active and Passive construction
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No |
Sentences |
Active |
Passive |
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01 |
Electricity
has become a human need in carrying out their daily activities. |
A |
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02 |
Of the five
hazard control techniques in the workplace |
A |
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03 |
The
technique that can be done is using engineering control |
A |
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04 |
This technique is one of the hazard
control using engineering control. |
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05 |
High-voltage electricity
can be found in certain areas such as towers, engine rooms, and UPS
(uninterrupted power supply) rooms. |
|
P |
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06 |
Although it still
has the risk of danger, at least this can be minimized more effectively. |
|
P |
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07 |
Engineering control
is also known as engineering engineering. |
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P |
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08 |
Of the five hazard
control techniques in the workplace |
|
P |
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09 |
Like the fan on the
pump motor, blower, or compressor is equipped with a cover or cover. |
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P |
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10 |
The goal is to
reduce the risk of being exposed to the danger of fan rotation. |
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P |
7.
Translation into Indonesia
1. Mengenal Engineering Control dan Contoh
Penerapannya
Engineering
control adalah salah satu teknik dari lima teknik yang ada untuk pengendalian
bahaya di lingkungan kerja. Teknik ini memiliki nilai yang lebih efektif dari
beberapa teknik lainnya. Meskipun masih tetap memiliki risiko bahaya,
setidaknya hal ini dapat meminimalisir dengan lebih efektif. Engineering
control disebut juga sebagai rekayasa teknik. Dari lima teknik pengendalian bahaya
di tempat kerja perusahaan dapat melakukan analisis kebutuhan yang paling cocok
untuk diterapkan dengan bantuan Software Engineering.Terdapat lima teknik
pengendalian bahaya atau yang lebih populer dikenal dengan hazard hierarchy
atau hierarchy of control. Hierarki pengendalian bahaya ini sebagai prinsip
penting dalam pengendalian bahaya dalam tempat kerja. Lima teknik pengendalian
bahaya itu adalah elimination, reduction, engineering control, administrative
control, dan personal protective equipment.
Contoh
Penerapan Engineering Control
Berikut
adalah beberapa contoh penerapan engineering control dalam pengendalian bahaya
di tempat kerja :
1.
Pemasangan cover motor
Mesin
yang terbuka atau dapat terlihat secara langsung sehingga mudah tersentuh akan
memiliki risiko yang lebih tinggi membahayakan. Maka dari itu suatu mesin
memiliki penutup dengan fungsi untuk mengurangi risiko bahaya penggunaannya.
Seperti kipas pada motor pompa, blower, atau kompresor dilengkapi dengan cover
atau penutup. Tujuannya adalah untuk mengurangi risiko terkena bahaya putaran
kipas. Teknik ini adalah salah satu pengendalian bahaya menggunakan engineering
control.
2.
Pemasangan pagar pengaman pada lokasi transformer
Listrik
sudah menjadi kebutuhan manusia dalam menjalankan aktivitas sehari-harinya.
Lokasi transformer adalah area yang memiliki tegangan listrik tinggi. Listrik
dengan tegangan tinggi dapat ditemukan di area-area tertentu seperti tower,
kamar mesin, dan ruang UPS (uninterrupted power supply). Penjangkauan area
transformer hanya untuk teknisi yang memiliki wewenang. Hal ini juga harus
dibarengi dengan penerapan engineering control untuk melindungi pekerja dari
bahaya sengatan listrik tegangan tinggi.
Kesimpulan
Pengendalian
bahaya dalam lingkungan kerja adalah salah satu hal yang wajib perusahaan
lakukan dalam menjamin keselamatan dan kesehatan pada pekerjanya. Teknik yang
dapat dilakukan adalah menggunakan engineering control. Perusahaan dapat
menentukan rekayasa teknik lebih mudah dan sesuai kebutuhan dengan bantuan
Software Engineering dari HashMicro. Hal ini dapat memberikan manfaat melalui
manajemen proyek yang sedang perusahaan jalankan secara lebih efisien. Unduh
skema harga berikut sebagai bahan pertimbangan keputusan penggunaan Software
Engineering perusahaan Anda.
8. Reason why Writer Uses Tenses
we
found Tenses in the article is simple present tense
RIVIEW ARTIKEL
EDITORIAL SKILL IN ENGLISH PUBLIPRENEUR-BASED LANGUAGE LEARNING
(PBLL-Editing)
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INSTRUCTIONS |
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1.
Use the red ink pen to mark
your editorial findings 2.
Write the name
of the manuscript’s writer
within the box 3.
Write your name
as an editor
within the editor’s box 4.
Write the title
of the manuscript 5.
Treat the draft
as an accepted manuscript to the Editorial
Department. 6.
Edit the manuscript by using the editorial
signs 7.
Put the number
of your editorial findings (mechanical, substantive, pictorial) within the box right- side 8.
Write your verbal
verification of suggestion,
comment, or input for the improvement of the manuscript. 9.
Give your editorial judgment about the manuscript from the perspective of prewriting,
drafting, revising, editing, publishing, marketing, and delivering) 10.
Good Luck..be
your best. |
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Editor |
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Study Program |
Electrical Engineering |
Electrical Engineering |
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Title of Manuscript |
Why do different
countries have different electric outlet plugs? |
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Verbal Verification: There are several author
errors in writing, namely the wrong placement of spaces and the use of capital letters. And the sentence a is replaced with the |
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Editorial Judgment I think the sentence-by-sentence
that the author wrote is very good and very easy to understand for readers to read, but
in writing, there
are several words
that I need
to improve, namely, the words finished, grounding, carry,
and started. but overall
I appreciate the author in choosing sentence by sentence. |
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QUESTIONERS OF PUBLIPRENEUR-BASED LANGUAGE
LEARNING (PBLL) USED TO TEACH ENGLISH FOR SPECIFIC PURPOSES OF
ELECTRO ENGINEERING
AT MUHAMMADIYAH UNIVERSITY
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Name |
Danu |
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Study Program |
Electrical Engineering |
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Lecturer |
Dr, Zulzalifah |
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Questioners |
Much (M); Enough
(E); Less (L) |
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How far do you know about the concept of the Publipreneur-Based Language Learning (PBLL) approach in
language teaching |
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Because I only learned the basics |
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Do you think that the Publipreneur-Based Language Learning (PBLL) approach applicable used to teach English for Specific Purposes
(ESP) |
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x |
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can ,because PLBB is specifically
for educational learning |
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3 |
How
far does Publipreneur-Based Language Learning (PBLL) influence your
English Reading skill in Electro Engineering Business |
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not so far just the basics |
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4 |
How
far does Publipreneur-Based Language Learning (PBLL) influence your English Writing
skill in ElectroEngineering Business |
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x |
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not so far just the basics |
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5 |
How
far does Publipreneur-Based Language
Learning (PBLL) influence your
English Listening skill in Electro Engineering Business |
x |
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So far , Because I like
watching Hollywood movies as a result my hearing ability is much better |
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6 |
How
far does Publipreneur-Based Language
Learning (PBLL) influence your
English Speaking skill in Electro Engineering Business |
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x | very lacking, because I
often stammer when speaking English |
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